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"We all did it. Every one of us." The men were gathering closer around him, forming a circle around the ritual stone. There was no escape for Kyan. He would have to do this, or he would get beaten for the rest of his life. Butterfly, they would call him as they kicked. Kyan had seen it happen before, to other cravens. And still, he couldn't help but wonder.
"Why do I have to do this? What does this have to do with being a man?"
One of the newly found men walked forward, staring down on Kyan. Just an hour ago, he had been Mirek the boy, Kyan's own friend. Now he was Kyan's elder. He still smelled of burned flesh. "It shows that pain means nothing to you. A man should not be guided by his boyish feelings, he should devote his life to obeying the Great Above. Are you scared, Kyan? Maybe you should rather be by the girls, crafting your woman's necklace." He laughed and the others joined in, mockingly.
"I'll do it," Kyan found himself say. The others hushed. "I'm no craven, I'm no butterfly, I'll do it!" He grabbed the saw before he could change his mind and began cutting.
He could feel the metal slicing through his bones, and he swore he could hear the sawteeth grinding. His body was paralyzed and Kyan dropped the saw and screamed in agony. There was blood everywhere, and his left arm burned with pain. His vision blackened as he fell on the ground, not even feeling the pain of the fall. I can't go on, he told himself. But when Kyan opened his eyes, he was looking into the eyes dozens of men. Some were holding him down, others were watching and whispering words. Mirek was holding the saw.
"No, please, no more. Please please, no more pain," Kyan pleaded.
"We only need one hand," Mirek said as he took the first cut.
"One hand to kill a man." Kyan thought he was going to faint, but he couldn't escape the agony.
"One hand to please a woman." Kyan's muscles were tensing all over his body as the pain continued.
"One hand to praise the gods." Mirek wasn't sawing anymore. Kyan tried to open his eyes, and saw everyone cheering. Someone was holding a severed arm up high, waving it about for everyone to see like it was some trophy. Mirek was red with blood.
"You lay down as Kyan the boy. Now rise as Kyan the man," he said.
The pain never stopped.
"Why do I have to do this? What does this have to do with being a man?"
One of the newly found men walked forward, staring down on Kyan. Just an hour ago, he had been Mirek the boy, Kyan's own friend. Now he was Kyan's elder. He still smelled of burned flesh. "It shows that pain means nothing to you. A man should not be guided by his boyish feelings, he should devote his life to obeying the Great Above. Are you scared, Kyan? Maybe you should rather be by the girls, crafting your woman's necklace." He laughed and the others joined in, mockingly.
"I'll do it," Kyan found himself say. The others hushed. "I'm no craven, I'm no butterfly, I'll do it!" He grabbed the saw before he could change his mind and began cutting.
He could feel the metal slicing through his bones, and he swore he could hear the sawteeth grinding. His body was paralyzed and Kyan dropped the saw and screamed in agony. There was blood everywhere, and his left arm burned with pain. His vision blackened as he fell on the ground, not even feeling the pain of the fall. I can't go on, he told himself. But when Kyan opened his eyes, he was looking into the eyes dozens of men. Some were holding him down, others were watching and whispering words. Mirek was holding the saw.
"No, please, no more. Please please, no more pain," Kyan pleaded.
"We only need one hand," Mirek said as he took the first cut.
"One hand to kill a man." Kyan thought he was going to faint, but he couldn't escape the agony.
"One hand to please a woman." Kyan's muscles were tensing all over his body as the pain continued.
"One hand to praise the gods." Mirek wasn't sawing anymore. Kyan tried to open his eyes, and saw everyone cheering. Someone was holding a severed arm up high, waving it about for everyone to see like it was some trophy. Mirek was red with blood.
"You lay down as Kyan the boy. Now rise as Kyan the man," he said.
The pain never stopped.
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Grandma
Frosty the snowman, jingle bells, silent night,
Always sound the same but it doesn’t feel right.
And Christmas just reminds me that you’re not here,
Even more than any other day of the year.
Mom can’t handle the silence, so she never comes home.
The tree is lit, the house is quiet, and I’m here alone.
The stockings are hung by the same fireplace,
But now that you’re gone, it’s just empty space.
We all go through the motions. It’s all we can do...
On holidays we no longer spend with you.
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The Marsh
The First King of the Isle hated magic. It was he who outlawed it, and his hatred seeped like a curse into the land and water until both were turned against beings of mystic power, and the only place left to them was neither of these, but both at once. Hunted and pursued, they fled there, and many went further over the sea, until few remained on the Isle.
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A man was drowning as the witch watched. He wore armor, and the tabard of the crown, and he’d blundered into the marsh without knowing where to set his feet.
He would kill her in an instant, if he knew she was there.
But he was drowning, and so she forced herself past her fear, a
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counting to thirteen
zero.
It's been two years since I fell in love with you
but this isn't about love.
i. I thought about telling you that sometimes,
I'm in a car and a country song comes on
and it takes me back -
with a bittersweet sadness -
because I remember.
I remember being in a car with you,
country songs on the radio,
which I normally wouldn't listen to, but
in these moments I didn't mind because I knew
that those songs would bring me back to those moments
and those moments were good.
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That is so disturbing - and oddly plausible ^^"